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No Ordinary Sun, by Hone Tuwhare


Tree let your arms fall:
raise them not sharply in supplication
to the bright enhaloed cloud.
Let your arms lack toughness and
resilience for this is no mere axe
to blunt nor fire to smother.

Your sap shall not rise again
to the moon’s pull.
No more incline a deferential head
to the wind’s talk, or stir
to the tickle of coursing rain.

Your former shagginess shall not be
wreathed with the delightful flight
of birds nor shield
nor cool the ardour of unheeding
lovers from the monstrous sun.

Tree let your naked arms fall
nor extend vain entreaties to the radiant ball.
This is no gallant monsoon’s flash,
no dashing trade wind’s blast.
The fading green of your magic
emanations shall not make pure again
these polluted skies . . . for this
is no ordinary sun.

O tree
in the shadowless mountains
the white plains and
the drab sea floor
your end at last is written.


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:iconvampyre-lover:
Dynamite Work!!!
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~RenaDementia Oct 16, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Very good, delicate pencil work! :thumbsup:
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:iconmoonwolf17:
this is fantastic :)
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=MirachRavaia Aug 14, 2011   General Artist
What a beautiful picture, and what a sad poem...
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~shadowgirl Aug 14, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
the last 4-5 lines of it I found almost threatening. I do a little writing as well and it kind of spurned an idea a while back for a "prophecy" :)
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~lucidflux Aug 8, 2011  Student General Artist
Absolutely lovely. Your pencil work is so delicate. <3
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:iconvcnielson:
Have I mentioned I am a huge fan of your trees *fangirls all over the trees*
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:iconlindsaypearce:
Really nice! I like the way you shade... cool textures.
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~VivalaVida Jun 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, so beautiful.:love:
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:iconskycladarts:
very Charles Vess I have to say...lovely!
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